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have you ever been in love?

does your heart skip a beat when they text you?
do you blush when you hear their name?
do you sigh when you hug?
do you blush at the thought of them?
does your heart beat faster when they simply peck your cheek or nose?
do you love them so much it hurts when youre away?
can you not express your love with words?
are you in love?

yes, you are
yes, i am
c:

i love you, Claire

edit- okay um
what
dem views
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:iconartdak71:
ArtDAK71 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
Hello;

Great Poem/writing.

Very nice.

David.
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:iconelectra1:
Electra1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep I'm in love. My boyfriend makes me feel ill. In the good way X3
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:iconmagicalotaku:
MagicalOtaku Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
c:
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:iconelectra1:
Electra1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp:
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:iconwaffles999999999:
waffles999999999 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD I"M HAVING A MINI SPAZ ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmagicalotaku:
MagicalOtaku Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG CALM DOWN JENn
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:iconwaffles999999999:
waffles999999999 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
I CAN'T SOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconsoemega:
Soemega Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Photographer
No.
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:icons3crt:
S3cRt Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
How Sweet Poem.
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:iconfairhaired-cutey:
fairhaired-cutey Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwwwwwwww :iconasdfghplz: this is adorable!!
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:iconwrite-then-think:
Write-Then-Think Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
All I'm going to say is that this is the exact way I feel.
I think I wanna Marry her!
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:iconmarianaerwin555:
MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
=MagicalOtaku, good poem about love! :D
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:iconanawkwardblue:
AnAwkwardBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Awww! :happybounce:
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:iconapplebetty:
AppleBetty Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I have. I make a point never to write poetry when it happens.
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:iconemitimd:
emiTimd Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
i think i am :blush:
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:iconsgm801:
SGM801 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was... still am but not as much. Middle school drama :icondepressedplz: nice free verse!
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:iconaskzany:
AskZany Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
When I read the line "Have You ever Been In Love" I think of a song I heard when I was a kid... :)
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:iconlascas:
Lascas Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Does it hurt when they decide to not tell you it's over.
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:iconyendys16:
yendys16 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aww, this is adorable. :)
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:iconinfinitexxx:
infinitexxx Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcocoloveplz: love is complicated. <3
lovely poem ('xcuse the pun)
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:iconaurabi:
Aurabi Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I wish someday I find my soulmate.
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:iconsanfelipe007:
sanfelipe007 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlovespinplz::iconlukkypencilxd::iconsanfelipe007::iconlovespinplz:
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:iconrockygirlm:
Rockygirlm Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
i am right now! :)

love you ben!
9/24/2012<3
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:iconzergmarex:
zergmarex Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yes but then I took an arrow to the knee
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:iconkyo-13:
kyo-13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
you just won at life
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:iconzergmarex:
zergmarex Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
haha thanks
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:iconkyo-13:
kyo-13 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
welcome
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:iconzergmarex:
zergmarex Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You should go look at my gallery
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:iconkyo-13:
kyo-13 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
its cool
but not really the type of thing im into ^^"
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:iconzergmarex:
zergmarex Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
What do you mean?
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:iconkyo-13:
kyo-13 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
its really cool but i wouldnt watch you
sorry ^^"
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:iconinfinitexxx:
infinitexxx Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ha. this comment i do love.
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:iconc-johnson462:
C-Johnson462 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Could you watch her die?
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:iconmagicalotaku:
MagicalOtaku Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Never
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:iconc-johnson462:
C-Johnson462 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Then you don't really love her.
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:iconmagicalotaku:
MagicalOtaku Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait what?
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:iconc-johnson462:
C-Johnson462 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Don't you know? Love is watching someone die.
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:iconkyo-13:
kyo-13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
LIES
love is the worst and most annoying feeling ever
its painful
it hurts to be in love
when they dont love you back
to know that you love them but they dont know and your worried that if you tell them it will ruin your friendship
and that they could hate you
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:iconkikster19:
kikster19 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
AMEN!!
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:iconkyo-13:
kyo-13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
thanks
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:iconutena11221:
utena11221 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love? Nope. Crush? Yes.
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:icongammawarmech:
Gammawarmech Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am.
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:iconkoshkaalisa:
KoshkaAlisa Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...This poem is bland and to the point without any feelings. You are just expressing your opinion on "love", in pointless questions of no substance.
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:iconbritlawrence:
BritLawrence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012   Photographer
:iconfacebooklikeplz:
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:icondecembermidnight:
DecemberMidnight Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012   General Artist
:iconfacebooklikeplz:

Thank you.
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:iconkoshkaalisa:
KoshkaAlisa Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
You are welcome
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:iconnitrokitteh:
NitroKitteh Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aweh. This describes EXACTLY how I feel for this one guy. I love this. Beautiful and cute! And I ADORE the picture that you used for it! Very eye-catching:heart: This deserves a :+fav:
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:icondecembermidnight:
DecemberMidnight Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012   General Artist
This sucks. Bad.

That's not to say I haven't been in love, because hell, that is another story.

But damn, you made the meaning sound stupid.
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:iconbritlawrence:
BritLawrence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012   Photographer
sounds like infatuation to me
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:iconl1zk1t:
L1zk1t Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist
have I ever been in love? nope. far cheaper that way. but cute picture I've always enjoyed fireworks.
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